AMBARAWA
Ambarawa
is a nice and homely place to stay. First of all, Ambarawa has a lot of tourism places like Pening Lake and Muncul. In the places, we can enjoy the beautiful view. Ambarawa also has a good atmosphere that will make you like living in the
middle of village. Ambarawa has a cozy temperature, a lot of trees, and paddy fields. In addition, Ambarawa is also close to some bigger cities like Salatiga or
Semarang. So, we can get everything that we want easily.
*the picture was taken from www.nyunyu.com

Hello Chris, I can catch your topic above. When I read your blog, I can't see your topic and your details were relating and sticking to the topic. Others, I can barely see your transitional words there. Keep up! Good Job!
BalasHapusHello Christian, after I have finished read your blog also the topic sentence, I get your topic sentence. but in the end of your sentence I little bit confuse and i think it is not related with your topic sentence. I can find your transition word there. Nice Christian! Good job!
BalasHapusoke thank you vidy and dea
BalasHapusPlease check the meaning of the word "homely" :-)
BalasHapus